L4 needs one more beat, and your second section is upside down. This is a tricky form, if you apply the modern rules of word count and syntax, it's even harder. These cinquains are great exercise forms. The mirror, erfly and reverse are simple inversions. The crown cinquain and the garland cinquain are mountainous tasks. Leon posted a good one to Mars today. Not my cat, that dude from Italy.
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